Dance of Flames

Gabriele · Subject: Dance of Flames Sat Jul 19, 2008 11:20 pm

Name:Dance of Flames

Element:Blaze

Mp cost:20MP

Effect:When enemies are too close and surrounds Gabriele, she uses this spell. Dancing in twirls and twirls, fire begins to form around her and consumes the enemies in a swirling small tornado of amber-gold flames. It doesn't kill them, but leaves them badly damaged and confused. She takes this opportunity to escape. A similarly strong water spell is able to extinguish the flames and makes it useless.

Appearance:At the beginning, orange flames begin to lick out towards the enemies in small tendrils and as she twirls more, more flames intertwine together and a hungry miny tornado of amber-gold flames burns the enemies around her. The flames disperse in a perfect circle.

History:Battling demons, she was tricked and ambushed. Blood thirsty demons and monsters surrounded her slowly as she saught for an escape route. Deeply frightened, she was about to let herself be slaughtered alive when a sudden urge deep within her took over. Music, beautifull and strong music. It rang in her head and immediately, her body began to sway to the tune. Dance...Dance! Her heart kept repeating and beating to the fast rhythem. Twirling fiercely, she felt the warm flames twirl with her as they slowly built up together and as she stopped abruptly just as the music stopped, the flames had already burned the enemies in a painfully damaged way. Taking the moment, she escaped the demons and retreated back to the district. Training determinely with her new power, she advanced it and could now freely control it without getting out of control.

Inarius · Number of posts: 123 Registration date: 2008-07-15

Define "Badly Damaged"

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Gabriele · Subject: Re: Dance of Flames Sun Jul 20, 2008 12:38 am

Hmm... Well, it gives them scorch marks that hurt but doesnt last. In a way it shocks them long enough for her to escape.

Inarius · Number of posts: 123 Registration date: 2008-07-15

Shocks as in stun? Maybe you could give them first degree burns instead...because you don't have lightning as an element.
And if it is a tornado wouldn't you be stuck in the middle?

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Max Magic: 90 mp

Hellion · Subject: Re: Dance of Flames Mon Jul 21, 2008 4:05 am

inarius...thank u so much for taking ur mod duty seriously but maybe u could not take it that seriously...?

I agree about first degree burns,but the tornado thing...there are many characters from animes that have a tornado move that they dont get hurt from...and besides she just went she moved in a tornado movement not made one...
But okay anyways...

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