http://undertheshadow.forumandco.com/writing-f37/-t1.htm Want to type up a poem, story, song lyrics, or a fanfic for something? Do it here. Only person that should reply to another users post is if the person is in the story and wants to fix something. Mon, 28 Jul 2008 06:35:15 GMT 10 http://crazyprofile.com/myspace_graphics/imgs/Evil014.jpg http://undertheshadow.forumandco.com/writing-f37/-t1.htm http://undertheshadow.forumandco.com/writing-f37/my-poems-that-prob-suck-t93.htm Junko here are some poems i've written the first 3 were for this girl i really liked My hand longs to hold yours my lips long for your kiss which is why my heart cant stand you moving to kansas you are more beutiful than a dove and you are my true love her critique for that one was "next time you want to kiss me be less obvious" i want to take away your anger and sadness and in return give you only happiness but that is as impossible as a monster in lochness ... Writing Mon, 28 Jul 2008 06:35:15 GMT http://undertheshadow.forumandco.com/writing-f37/my-poems-that-prob-suck-t93.htm#391 http://undertheshadow.forumandco.com/writing-f37/my-poems-that-prob-suck-t93.htm